ok so possible title options for my narrative are:
Falling Upwards
Driveway Interuption
Delicate Supporter
As a point of reference the paper is about a ladder breaking with my dad on it while I was shooting hoops in the driveway and how my dads toughness and manly in situations like these in my life has made me a better person.
I'm sort of struggling between which title to choose because the first one is clever in that my dad is falling but teaching me at the same time so I'm learning and my thoughts are getting better represented by up. The second is just interesting and creative but no real thought behind I think. The last one is a title that describes the ladder that supports him but is too delicate and breaks but at the same time can be thought of my dad supporting me and teaching me, but it's funny cause he isn't delicate, but gets hurt in the story so may seem somewhat delicate. please give me feedback.
2 comments:
Fastes commentator EVER!!! I liked Drivway interruption for your title. It catches my attention and sounds really cool, it also makes a lot of sense with your story
so to conclude I still couldn't wuite choose one and even start trying to tweak them so I would like them more, but in the end I went with Delicate Supporter
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